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The Bridge of Execution

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An Execution Challenge


In J. R. R. Tolkien's The Fellowship of the Ring, Gandalf has problems opening the door to the mines of Moria

—even though the instructions are plainly written on the door.

Gandalf is experiencing an execution challenge; that is to say,

  • he knows the desired consequence he wants,
  • he casts a spell to get what he desires,
  • yet the desired consequence still eludes him


At The Bridge of Execution, the Execution Challenge is represented by:

  • the writer whose target audience is on one side of the bridge after reading the writer's text
  • when the writer's desired consequence is for the target audience to be on the other side of the bridge,
  • yet that desired consequence is not being realized.

In such a situation, visiting (or revisiting) the writing decisions made at the following locales seems appropriate:

  • The Cliffs of Guidance
  • The Checkered Fields
  • The Plain of Perspective
  • The Refiner's Fire

That is to say, the writer's text needs one (or more) revisions in order for the desired consequence to be realized.


Assignment
  1. Familiarize yourself with the content of this webpage and its linked webpages.
  2. Write a 300-500 word reflective essay in which you explore how you might use some of that information in three different contexts:
    • when you are writing,
    • when you are interacting with classmates, and
    • when you are reading a text composed by a non-student writer.
  3. Submit that essay to your instructor.

 

A Challenge of Consequence
  • Choose your writing Challenge; change your world
  • Consequence and Credibility
  • A Darker Side of the Dark Wood
  • Three (General) Writing Scenarios
A Rhetorical Challenge
  • Choosing a viable target audience
  • Context, Motive, and Action
  • Keep the target audience small
  • Researching the target audience
  • A Topic (to write about) versus
    A Writing Challenge
A Role-Play Challenge
  • The Willful Reader
A Research Challenge
  • Wikipedia
  • Judging the Credibility (of recorded information)
  • Researching the target audience
  • Keeping track of your research
  • A Topic (to write about)
A Guidance Challenge
  • Should writer's research their audience?
  • Planning a reader's journey
A Discovery Challenge
  • Draft/Sketch a record of your discoveries
A Media Challenge
  • What's an audience forum?
  • Seeing "Unseen" Media
An Execution Challenge
  • Global versus Local Revisions
A Perspective Challenge
  • Commenting on a Peer's Text
  • Peer Response Questions
  • Peer Response versus Copy Editing
  • What does your reader perceive?
A Learning Challenge
  • The Point
An Acceptance Challenge
  • What is copy editing?
  • Backwards can be forwards
  • Make preparations to copy edit?
A Challenge to Begin Anew
  • Finite and Infinite Writers
An Aggregating Challenge
  • Arranging the separate pieces
  • A preliminary arrangement draft
  • Methods of development
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